Twas alright...
Well it was good... Apart from the fact that the text was hard to read, and it would disappear too fast. That really put me off.
Then for some reason your art style changed for a reason. Like the bit when the person in the film is laying on the ground, its just a basic human outline.
Apart from that I think it was pretty good... If you put in a bit more effort it may have been excellent!
JudgeDJ